Demetri Fay (Finished)

[demetrifay]

Demetri Fay;;
is now entering it's all in yer mind

About You;;
behind the RPer

Name: Tyler
Age: 18
Years of Rping: 5 months
Contact:PM

ID Tag;;

Alias: N/A
Name: Demetri Fay
Gender: Male
Orientation: Straight
Age: 21
Species: Human
Job: hunter
Religious Affiliation: None,

Dear Diary;;

Specialties:
1. Excellent swordplay
2. Superior Marksman
3.Flexible and swift
4.Intelligent
5. Can take a hit

Summary:
Demetri is fast and flexible thanks to years of martial arts and fencing. He has been working on his swordsmanship and his marksman ship since he was 9 when he was attacked by a werewolf and he can shoot a quarter 50 m off with a revolver. Demetri is very smart graduating from high school and college in 3 years each. Demetri, though not very strong when it comes to hand to hand combat, can take a hit better then most humans. All though he isn't very strong at hand to hand, he knows a lot about martial arts which helps when he does fight with his hands. He loves using blades more then any other weapon but will use a gun if he has to.

Weakness:
1. Trusts easily
2. his moral code
3. overconfident

Summary:
Demetri has always had trouble with being a hunter. Even though he knows that the creatures are evil he has trouble killing them. And often against his better judgment he trusts people he shouldn't. Demetri often ends up getting hurt because he thinks he is stronger. He hates to give up. And he hates appearing weak.

Appearance;;

Looks: Demetri is 21 but he looks more like his is 18, which makes him unhappy when he buys alcohol
Hair: Black Hair
Eyes: Shockingly Blue Eyes
Height: 6' 0"
Marks: Demetri has a tattoo of the crest of the knights of the round table on his right forearm and 5 long scares across his chest from a werewolf attack
Race: Caucasian
Skin Tone: white, no tan whatsoever, with a few freckles
Body Type: Demetri is slim but muscular, with semi-broad shoulders
Clothing Style: usually seen wearing a tight black t shirt, to show off his muscular chest, with jeans and a trench coat or duster to hide his weapons. The more articles of clothing he wears the more weapons he has on him.
Footwear: usually seen wearing a pair of cowboy boots

Summary:
Demetri has dark brown hair which is contrasts nicely to his blue eyes and his pale skin. He usually has his trench coat on no matter what the weather is. When wearing his trench coat he usually has his rapier and a shotgun on him. He always carries a hunting knife. Demetri leaves the knife in his boots. And when he doesn't have his trench coat he tries to carry a revolver.

Personality;;

Likes:
1. Sharp objects
2. Fairness
3. tough opponents

Dislikes:
1. losing a fight
2. unfair fights, 2 on 1 etc.
3. being cheated

Flaws:
1. stubborn
2. can be a heavy drinker
3. is an angry drunk

Summary:
When people first see Demetri, they see him as standoffish and stubborn. Which is partly true because Demetri can be on of the most stubborn people in the world , but when people get to know him he is very loyal and trusting. He hates it when he trusts people and they betray him, he always takes it personal and gets them back, usually with one of his many blades. Demetri loves fighting opponents that bring out the best in him but hates when he is outnumbered because it is unfair and cheating. But Demetri often gets into these type of fights when he drinks. Though he doesn't do it often, he can be quite angry when he drinks.

Background Check;;

Family Members:
Father: Lucian Fay
Mother: Dayla Cook
parents never married
no siblings
School Attended/Attending: Graduated from Duke with a BA in medicine
Grade Level: BA in medicin Graduation Year: 2007
History:
Demetri Fay was born in Jacksonville FL. His father was never around when he was young. He lived with his mother up untill he was 9 years only. On his ninth birthday he and his mother were attacked by a Werewolf. His mother was killed and Demetri was almost killed except he was saved by a hunter who happened to be close by.

The hunter nursed Demetri back to health. The werewolf had clawed him across his chest. The hunter taught Demetri everything he knew. Demetri became a great swordsman and marksman. He also became a master of several martial arts forms, including Judo, Capoeira, and Tae Kwan Do.

After 7 years of training, Demetri and the hunter tracked down the Werewolf that killed his mother. Demetri and the hunter were able to quickly take it down, but not before the hunter was bitten, contaminating his blood. After the battle the hunter revealed himself the be Lucion Fay, Demetri's father. After an emotional reunion Lucion begged Demetri to take his life. He didn't want to live as a monster. Demetri, reluctantly, killed his father that night.

Code Word: 'poof the magic fairy babi'
In the rules

Mad Skills;;

Demetri leaned against the wall, he was to tired for words. The werewolf that had haunted him for years lay dead a few feet away from him thanks to the help of the Hunter. Demetri looked over at the hunter sitting opposite him. The Hunter was holding onto his side.

"He took a bite out of me." The Hunter said.

Demetri took a sharp breath, "No," he thought, "if he changes ill have to go after him next." Demetri stood up and walked over to him, "you will be ok," he said.

"No i won't," The hunter said, "I'm going to change. You know what you have to do." The hunter pulled out his desert eagle and handed it to Demetri.

"I can't," Demetri said, "you've raised me for the past 7 years. You taught me all that i know. I can't kill you."

"You have to," The hunter said pressing the gun into Demetri's hand, "I don't want to be a monster, you can help me not be one."

Demetri took the gun and took a deep breath. "If that's what you really want," Demetri said as his voice broke and a tear ran down his cheek. Demetri took aim at the hunter's chest and fired.

The hunter groaned in pain. "Thank you Demetri. I'm sorry i wasn't able to be a better father to you but at least I was able to be with you for a little while." And after saying that Lucian Fay, the hunter, died.

[Lady Thorn]

Summary for weaknesses, although technically six sentences, needs to be longer. Short sentences like "He hates to give up" are cheating, especially given the next one starts with an "And". Ditto physical description.

History, again, is technically long enough, but you could easily go into more detail in it. Not as critical as weaknesses and physical description though.