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Post by shadows on Nov 30, 2008 3:36:54 GMT -5
Me? I think you have ALOT of free time!  |
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Post by The Janitor on Nov 30, 2008 18:48:43 GMT -5
Well when you get a deal with CAPCOM about a certain story then you'll understand lol I'm sure he'll be waiting a loooooooooong time for that. |
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Post by The Janitor on Nov 30, 2008 19:35:47 GMT -5
Well that's good news. I'll simply take my leave now. Otherwise my next post will drop the nuke known as Janitor's criticism. Since I can't say if it would be constructive or destructive because I don't know what kind of person I'm dealing with.
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Post by The Janitor on Nov 30, 2008 22:17:30 GMT -5
Sugar coated version:
Aside from many errors (from technical stuff to spelling/grammar) your story just isn't my cup of tea. Even if it were it would need a major overhaul. I find it very hard to read and keep up with. I had to do a lot of cut/paste just to get it where I could read it for five minutes straight. Of course having a touch of ADD doesn't make things any easier. As far as the errors go. Some of it doesn't apply since this is a rough draft like you said. The rest.... Do a little more research.... I could add try to get a better grasp on how the real world works, but we're talking about fiction. Still a little bit of realism is nice. Although too much might make things a wee bit boring.
Also, there isn't a deal until you can wave a contract with a fat six figure sum in everyone's faces. When you do wave one in everyone's face could you loan me five bucks? ;D
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Post by The Janitor on Nov 30, 2008 23:18:50 GMT -5
Could you loan me five bucks then?  |
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Post by The Janitor on Dec 1, 2008 0:31:02 GMT -5
Sweet. Now I can add an extra Sharkie pen to my order to Cold Steel....
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