Tyr Malagost (Done)

[stella]

Tyr Malagost;;
is now entering it's all in yer mind

About You;;
behind the RPer

Name: Bri (pronounces Bree)
Age: 15
Years of Rping:3-4 years
Contact:daqueenbitchfromhell is my IM, I don't answer my e-mails, so it's hopeless if you wanna talk to me through that

ID Tag;;

Alias: Tears
Name: Tyr Malagost
Gender: male
Orientation:
Real Age: 135
Physical Age: 25
Species: Were-Wolf
Sire: Lucian
Religious Affiliation: none
Wealth:multi-millions
Job: he inherited it from his grandfather, and invested it wisely in Yahoo, Google, and Microsoft

Dear Diary;;

Specialties:
1.playing guitar
2.hunting
3.working in a pack

Summary:
He loves his guitar with a love that couldn't be rivaled by anything but to a mother to her child. He could play and play until his fingers bled, which would be hours since he has callouses from playing. His hunting is his next greatest joy. He loves to play with his food and will torment them for days on end before he finally moves in and kills them because he's so hungry. He can toy with his food up to a week and then he will corner them, and kill them with brute force. But his instincts kick in when ever he's around another wolf, and he will be a happy pup if he can work with a pack, and with others in the position of power. He absolutely hates being in a position where he has to be under pressure of dealing with the others, though.

Weakness:
1.silver
2.his fascination with humans (They confuse him)
3.his tendency to steer clear of other wolves

Summary:

His fascination with humans is one down fall of his that he knows is bad for him, but they just fascinate him so much he just can't stay away. He will often be in a big city where he could hunt and satisfy his hunger for knowledge of the humans. His closeness to the humans leads us to the separation from the other wolves. He doesn't know how to act around them and will not act as if sh is a normal wolf around them, even though he is strongly connected with his instincts. But his last weakness is the most obvious one that every wolf has: his weakness of silver. He is highly allergic to it, and his heart and lungs will stop if he gets it into his system. He found that out when he was wearing one of his favorite pure silver rings. He couldn't breath, so he took everything off, and then he was fine. the rest will be showed in the history.

Human Appearance;;

Hair: Black and fluffy
Eyes:dark blue
Height: 6'3''
Marks:he always has a black streak on his lower lip (look at his pic)
Race:Swedish
Skin Tone:fair skinned
Body Type: skinny and slightly feminine
Clothing Style: slightly Gothic and tight ( a few examples)
Another example
Footwear: His normal everyday wear
his good shoes he uses for going out to parties and such
His dress shoes used for special occasions

Summary:
His style is gothic and he loves it. He changes his look every few years or so, but lately he's been keeping it goth. He wears platform shoes and dark tight shirts that show off his well made abs. His pants are often skinny jeans that are either black or red. He won't wear anything that is pink or green though, he thinks it's horrible with his skin tone, even though he looks great in it. He wears large hoop earrings that are very thick (look at his picture) and puts a streak of black lipstick on his upper and lower lip before he goes out in public.

Wolf Appearance;;

Eye Color:Bright bright yellow and an icy icy blue
Fur Color: brownish black
Fur Length: a few inches (around 4)
Fur Texture: a bit rough, but other then that, very smooth and silky
Size: 4 ft at the shoulders
Marks: his legs are brindled with a reddish brown
The Fluffy Tyr

Personality;;

Likes:
1. chewing on bones
2. sweets
3. playing with children

Dislikes:
1. bad bones (pork and chicken bones)
2. adults
3. broccoli

Flaws:
1. he's skittish
2. his childish nature
3. his love of bones

Blessings
1. he's extremely fast
2. he's smart
3. he loves and will protect children

Summary:

He's extremely protective of children. He won't allow anyone to touch them in any way that is harmful if he's around, and he will lose his temper if he ever sees it. He is loving though, he is extremely loving. He can be this big cuddly loving dog, or this lovable cuddly childish young man. He loves all types of music, but will only play industrial and thrash. He is an atheist and will proudly show that he is, and will argue his point to any extreme believer in any type of religion. But he is gentle about his arguments and will use only a calm cool voice that is never raised when he knows he's right, the other times, he'll just yell for the hell of it.

Background Check;;

Family Members: his niece: Alyson Marag
Birth Place: Sweden
Childhood:
His child hood is completely forgotten.

Transformation:
his transformation was unremembered. Everything is blank, nothing that he could pull out of his mind is anything useful, only made up fantasies.

Prey:
his prey is anything that crosses his path when he's starving. But when he's not hungry, he won't kill children at all. But anyone that doesn't look like a child, he will kill them.

Moon Tidings:
His moon tidings do not effect him. He can only change during the night though, when the moon is out, and when the moon is new, he cannot change.

Other Transformation:
like any other wolf he can change you by getting any of his bodily fluids into your system (NOOOO not urine or cum, spit or blood is how he dose it)

History:

The night he was turned was all a blur. All he can remember was burning, his blood being spilled, and great big bright yellow eyes. He strains to remember his transformation, but nothing is able to get through his mind but the pain and the color of his blood splashing all over the ground. He couldn't under stand for the longest time, he wondered and wondered, taking up at least 50 years of his life.

He soon found his obsession over children. He's not a pedofile or anything, he's just in love with children. He worked with them during the night and then when he was hunting, he stayed away from them no matter what. He still works with them, trying to maintain a normal life, despite his love of killing when he's on the hunt.

Code Word:
In the rules
do the mashed potatoe, do the twiste

Mad Skills;;

[Example of your Role-Playing]
*points to Stella's profile with a annoyed sweat mark*

[Urjasz Volkova]

Few spelling mistakes here and there, along with grammar. They're acceptable. However, the history is far too vague and short for a 135 year old wolf. Please develop the history some more, explaining things like what he did with his time, who he spent it with, how did he cope with the changes of modern life etc (at 135 he wouldn't know how to play the electric guitar at birth, it didn't exist XD)

So please take some well used time to sort the tweeks. Once this is done, I see no reason not to be accepted.