Vilmos Fiammetta [done!]

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Character Name;; Vilmos Fiammetta
is now entering it's all in yer mind

-Human Form- l -Leopard Form-

About You;;
behind the RPer

Name: Not telling you
Age: Not telling
Years of Rping: 1 year
Contact: Sorry, no

ID Tag;;

Alias: Vilmos and Vilm-the second only by his sister so don't you dare go calling him that! He will either break down or flip on you!
Name: Vilmos Fiammetta
Gender: Male
Orientation: Straight
Real Age: 23 years
Physical Age: 17 years years
Species: Were-Tiger
Sire: Some random person who was helping him find his sister
Religious Affiliation: None
Wealth: Trillions
Job: His parents gave it to him and his sister when they dissappeared. He is a author and a artist, though it is mostly only for himself.

Dear Diary;;

Specialties:
1. His focus is unbelievable, there can be a fair going by and he wont even bat an eyelid in that direction.
2. He can just tell if something bad is going to happen, though he can't know any particulars
3. His patience is quite wonderful-he is still waiting to find his sister after thirteen years and he is yet to get frustrated
4. Movement-he can stay without moving for hours on end without getting tense or sore, and when he does move he is quite graceful.
5. When he is in tiger form he can still speak english-though he prefers not to as it is quite difficult

Summary:
Well, we all have specialties, let me tell you his. Now, you might ask, is it possible to be so focused that you don't even look when a big parade marches down your street because you're busy with something else? Well, if you answered yes-congratulations! But seriously, he doesn't faulter-that is proved by the fact that he still searches for his sister-unless he has the feeling something is wrong, or something bad is going to happen. Which brings us to our next specialty. He can just tell when something bad is going to happen, or something is wrong. Unfortunately, he can't find out anything to do with when, where, or how-and not even close to who. He is patient though, and what proves it is that he is still trying to find his sister after thirteen years an still isn't flustered enough to give up or freak out. Also, he can stay absolutely still for hours on end, and when he does move it's with an absolute grace.

Weakness:
1. He is really bad at distracting himself because of his keen focas, so if he is upset about something good luck snapping him out of it
2. Self confidence-he has litterarly none of it, therefore if he gets a compliment he either treasures it... or doesn't believe it
3. In both forms, right at the joint of his (front) left leg is quite weak and he can easily be knocked down if he is attacked from the right side. It also causes him pain when he is excerting himself and can cramp up so that all he can think of is the pain

Summary:
Now, for the weaknesses... don't you dare use them against him. He is really bad at distracting himself because of his focas. How a strength turned to a weakness is unfortunate but it is nearly impossible to snap him out of his focas-thus another reason why he hasn't quit looking for his sister. His self confidence is non-existent, so compliments are either treasured or just a load of bullshit to him. Finally, a physical issue. His (front) left leg is quite weak and he can easily be knocked over if attacked from the right side.

Human Appearance;;

Hair: Whitish Silver
Eyes: Gentle Blue-Icey Blue when angry-Deep Blue when upset
Height: 6 foot
Marks: A red moon on his neck around his left shoulder
Race: English
Skin Tone: Extremely pale
Body Type: He's quite slim, but with lanky muscle and is quite tall even though he only looks seventeen
Clothing Style: Something loose that doesn't cling to him to much. Usually some loose jeans, and a jacket with no shirt underneath-though he can clean up in a suit real good
Footwear: Sneakers

Summary:
He has silvery hair, but it does not make him look old at all. His eyes are often a gentle blue but if he gets mad they become piercing, or if he's brooding about something they are a deep, dark blue. He's six feet tall and easily reconised by a red moon on his neck around his left shoulder. He is english and extremely pale. He's quite slim, but he does have some muscle in there that's stretched out becasue of his height. He is usually found wearing something loose-though he can clean up really could if he tries-and he prefers sneakers to anything else.

Tiger Appearance;;

Eye Color: Gentle Blue-Icey Blue when angry-Deep Blue when upset
Fur Color: Whitish Silver
Fur Length: Rather short but not stumbly
Fur Texture: Soft and smooth
Size: Size of a small horse, or 14 hands, or 4 feet 6.7 inches
Marks: A red moon around his right shoulder

Personality;;

Likes:
1. Shadows
2. Nature
3. Quiet

Dislikes:
1. Sudden noises
2. Small spaces
3. Bright sunlight

Flaws:
1. He is way to aware of his surroundings, to the point of being paranoid if he doesn't know whats around him
2. Has trouble around others and has issues with trust

Summary:
He likes shadows and nature. He loves the quiet-though silence drives him insane becasue he gets paranoid really easily. He doesn't like sudden noises becuase they usually end up in being an ambush. He hates small claustrophobic spaces and bright sunlight. He is way too aware of his surroundings, to the point of being paranoid if he doesn't know what's around him. He also has trouble around others and has huge issues with trusting others.

Background Check;;

Family Members: His sister: Miranda Fiammetta
Birth Place: Forks, Washington
Childhood: He was terrific in school-accept for in gym, there he only managed to squeek by because of his leg. Then his parents disappeared and his sister after them.
Transformation: Started trying to find his sister and asked some randomn person for help, when that person got pissed off a couple of weeks later they couldn't control themself
Prey: Anythings but humans
Moon Tidings: Anytime
Other Transformation: Poison in his claws can edgect into his prey to change them
History:
Well, I was born in the small, rainy town of Forks. I got top grades in everything in gym and was the younger of two siblings. My sister was the opisit of me, way too athletic and not very academic. I remember us trying to elp each other become better at what we absolutely sucked at. It didn't work too well. She just got frustrated and I learned to deal with the pain in my leg. I had never mentioned it to anyone, but one day-when my sister was training my stamina so I might live to survive that dreaded beap test-my leg cramped up and all I could think about was how much it hurt. When I could tell what was happening again I was in the hospital with my sister sitting beside my anxiously. I think it was the longest I had ever seen her sit still. The docter came in with some x-rays and told me that something was wrong with my leg. Appearently the bones were constructed weird around my leg socket. It couldn't be fixed as they hadn't seen it before... ever. How comforted by that I didn't know. The years went by after that. Everyone that knew but my sister treated my different. So I didn't tell anyone at my school, but my parents made sure I never went to gym class ever again.

Then it happened. OK, I really have no idea what happened. All I know is that one day when I was ten years old. I woke up late, which was strange because my parents usually woke me up after 10 am when my sister had come back from her morning jog. I didn't hear anyone downstairs. I lay still anxiously, wondering where everyone went. Then I heard crying a slowly got up and tip-toed down the hallway in my rockstar PJs. I stopped in front of mom and dads room. There I saw my sister. She looked up at my call for her. Then said that mom and dad were gone and that it must have been all hr fault and that she was going to look for her and I had to stay where I was becuase she was coming back. I stayed in that house for a couple of weeks, eating cold cereal with milk and ordering pizza becuase mom wouldn't ever let me cook and she'ld be mad at me when sissy brought her back. Finally I decided sister had gotten lost and went to look for her. I asked someone to help me and he agreed.

Months passed by as we searched for her, I turned thirteen but told no one so that the man helping me wouldn't make us stop to celebrate. Then one day I decided to follow the man on one of his secret missions into the forest. It turned out that he could turn into a huge tiger. At first I was ecstatic... but not for long. It turns out he couldn't control himself very well and he bit my neck and shoulder, leaving a red moon shae when it finally healed up. I changed then... but when I woke up the man was gone too. Everyone I knew and trusted... gone. I refused to give up though and plowed on-after changing back of course. Eventually someone found me though and I was sent to live with an adopted family. There I was raised and I went to collage. After collage I disappeared from the world again-leaving a note to my adopted parents thanking them for everything they had done for me-and went off on the endless search for my sister. I'm still looking...

Code Word:
i hAve read da rules

Mad Skills;;

Do I have to?

[fusion]

I'm ready to be judged!

[rowan kestrel amber]

Could you perhaps fix a few things. One fix your specialties and weaknesses. For the numbered list. Just use like a few words. Not the whole explantion. That's what the summaries are for. I found it confusing having to read through all of that. As well as your appearance. Keep it to a minimum of a few words and the rest in your summary. If you would like a source look at some of the other memeber bios that have been made.

And then maybe make your history in third person. I find it diffcult to read in first person because you usually talk in first person and not third person. I just find it to read third person a bit better than first person. Thanks. That should be it for now.